You Bring Me Bread

You Bring Me Bread

You bring me bread,

fresh baked and kneaded

with your soft open hands.

You offer yourself

in naked, honest devotion

spread across my bed

in warm, flowing voluptuous

curves.

You hold out hope

and bold salvation,

like a warm poultice

to draw the poison

of the past from

these deep wounds.

Your adoration is like

the warm June sun

stroking my skin

till I am erect with passion,

anticipation and desire

for all of you.

And I would eat this bread

at the altar where

you have laid out

this carnal feast,

but I would break it

with you.

Would drizzle it well

in virgin oils and

sweet, aromatic, dark

 balsamic tastes

and flavour it with strong cheese

and fragrant herbs.

So bake me loaves

that we may share

many flavours together;

pesto, sundried tomatoes,

Parmesan, basil and garlic

and we will dine well

my love.

 

13/11/12

Reviews

[Jon Hogg]

Yes, very good as per usual! The(k)neadiness and feelings of vulnerability mixed with the delicate seasoning of wild eroticism seems very 'run of the mill' for you John. Well done, you've managed to 'grind' out another gem!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you John. You have read this piece with a keen eye. See you soon.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Jon even! It's been a long day!

[Nicky Sarti]

Other than being great as usual John, you have now made me hungry for bread...
Do not be surprised if you either get bread next meeting or a slapped bottom!!!
I am going to have to call Karina for some baking advice me thinks!!
(Is it too late at 3am to bake?)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Hi Nicki, I'd prefer to be baking beneath the duvet at 03:00. But real bakers do it through the night in order to stock the shelves for morning lol. Thank you for your kind review. See you soon.

[Nicky Sarti]

Lolz... I have just slept for like almost two days, need to eat now! :-)
When's the next meetup? I have confused myself a little! (nothing new there right?)

[.]

Wow, this is very well written. I love your imagery and metaphors, John. Great job :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you so much Cord. I'd be tempted to say I was well bred but that would be a corny joke lol!

[KAOlmsted]

How strange that this should be the first poem I read after a lunch that consisted of the flakiest bread I have ever eaten...crumbs, everywhere...bloody awful mess. Not so this piece. It's incredible, John. Very passionate and a bit racy...got my pulse rate up ;-)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Hi Kimmer, thank, you and thank you. You are amazing.

[Violet Dreams...]

Bread,Virgin oil, Pesto, Tomatoes, Sun,Devotion, Passion, Wound, Salvation, Desire, Anticipation,Love and Bed
A little knead here and a little knead there, heat up the oven and after a hour of bake bring it out on a plate.
Voilà, there you are, John McFayden and his masterpiece

[John Alexander McFadyen]

So glad you liked it Violet Dreams. Many thanks.

[Leslie Philibert]

A poem that convinces with an erotic content in good taste ( in all ways!),
good work.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you so much Leslie

[Hamza]

bread and ecstasy ...
i almost was wondering how one could develop such a seductive appetite for a loaf of bread ...
very different .. :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ha easy. Nice bread made by a fair maiden. Thanks Hamza!

[Anonymous Girl]

Mention of bread made me more hungry!!!
I like the flow and wording of it... Nice working :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Girl.

[Anonymous Girl]

No problem :)