Angels are Delicate

Angels are Delicate

Their beauty is true,

without question.

They have poise and charm,

an elegance of being

so far above mere mortals.

They stand true deportment,

straight backed and graceful,

their hair long, silken strands

their skin milky pure, unchaste.

Their breath is hallowed,

their words misty whispers

that caress the soul

with warm dreams.

Their laugh is a harp of doves

rippling in enchanted echoes,

deep in the heart of our minds.

But even so

angels are delicate.

 

06/10/12

Reviews

[SilentEcho]

Sometimes I forget how beautiful the pictures words can paint can be until I read something like this. You’ve weaved a wonderfully intricate tapestry of sensations with this one

[Kajal Gulabani]

Beyond words.. Head over heels in love with the description.. Cheers!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

So glad you liked it. Who said I only write erotica!?

[quinfinn]

both literally and metaphorically , this works very well. terrific write, cleverly penned

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Many thank yous Quin

[Leslie Philibert]

Like this too,if you are an angel fan have a look at Paradise Lost, good one.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Leslie. Am moving on to witches lol!

[Heather]

...such a beautiful piece of work, i love the detailed description. great write!

[Nicky Sarti]

You're soppy...
And very good at writing poetry and stuff x

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you I think?

[Nicky Sarti]

It's a meant compliment hun!

[Pratik]

Dreamy and divine! This one takes you to a different world. I love the rich words and the perfectly detailed description :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

You are very kind Aaran. Thank you for such a lovely review.

[Mark]

Desirable.. ethereal .. perfection... but unchaste? Great read and wonderful description.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thanks Mark

[emmajoy]

'Their breath is hallowed, ~ their words misty whispers ~ that caress the soul
with warm dreams.'

Subtle, sweet words, almost a whisper; a poem to dream about. Methinks everyone should have his or her own angel.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Emma.

[Leigh]

This was very enjoyable to read and guess you are right they are delicate and should be treated with care and respect, the mortal world is not a place for them to dwell

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Leigh