Distracted

Distracted

I’m distracted…

It’s those gorgeous blue eyes

or perhaps those long legs and perfect thighs.

Or maybe the pert and sweet little nose

or the kissable lips; don’t forget those.

I’m distracted

by sexy full hips

and I must return to irresistible lips,

a soft delicate neck so tempting to nuzzle

that my falling for you is far from a puzzle.

I’m distracted

by your sensational laugh

by thoughts of you naked alone in the bath,

by your accent and the words that you choose,

by the smell of the perfume spray that you use.

I’m distracted

by your radiant smile,

that makes me want to kiss you awhile

over every inch of your soft peach-like skin

again and again and again and again.

 

22^nd July 1998

Reviews

[Mia]

Oh John! Here's my problem. I think that you'll stop believing me if I always get excited about your poetry. That you'll mistake my honesty for kindness. That it'll mean less to you each time. But you write things I love and I can't pretend I don’t and this is no exception. This is quirky, beautiful, sensitive and sexy!
I hope you showed said woman this poem. It would make anyone extremely happy :)
"or the kissable lips; don’t forget those.
I’m distracted
by sexy full hips
and I must return to irresistible lips,"

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Mia, I am very humbled that you like my writing. I think it is what any person would want to know what they are passionate about is approved of by others. I am so glad this one is quirky as someone recently said I wrote the same stuff all the time. I know that is not true and I do not sek approval just that it is nice if people enjoy something you do. A bit like making love. It should ALWAYS be about your partner never you! Thank you Mia.

[Mia]

You're too much of a giver! It works if you’re all about your lovers needs and they're all about yours. It’s a win-win. But how often has that happened to you?
It's pleasure :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

happened once I guess but she suffered from morbid jealousy and kept running away until my kids told me that if I had her back they woulf disown me.

[Nicky Sarti]

What Mia said too!

[Lily Mae]

This is sexy and hot with style and only your flare.. well done.. :) xo

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thanks Lily you are so kind.

[Pól]

so am I !!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Paulo you will never change my man. Power to ya!

[Pól]

Great writing, john. U really conveyed her beauty

[~]

I'm sorry...I was going to leave a review...but I forgot what you were saying....I got distracted by intoxicating poetry....
Delicious writing, John.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you so much. Glad you liked it.

[Alexander143]

Beautiful painting you have there. I love it. It's a good read.