That I Would Die For

 

That I Would Die For

Let me cleanse you of your pain,

like a gentle summer shower

that leaves the air refreshed.

Let me wash away your guilt,

like soap upon your skin

and make you silky soft.

Let me hold you and adore you

with every ounce of love

that I have in my heart.

For every moment in your life

I grow stronger,

and I know my soul belongs to you.

So let us collide like planets

so our universe explodes

and erupts with joy.

Let me kiss you deep

and in the meeting of our mouths

feel the passion of truth.

Give yourself faithfully to me

in that sweet, sweet surrender

that I would die for.

 

 

5^th August 2010

Reviews

[Mia]

"Let me cleanse you of your pain,
like a gentle summer shower
that leaves the air refreshed."
What more is there to say.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Mia you are so lovely. Many thanks

[Violet Dreams...]

The things you wanna do for the person you love is amazing. You can go to any extent, you would do things which you never would do for yourself.For the presence you long, your poem expresses this beautifully

[John Alexander McFadyen]

But others sometime will not give. Thank you for a lovely review!

[Irene]

awww that's actually sweet.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Hey Irene, I AM sweet-sometimes!

[Irene]

haha i know you are.

[KAOlmsted]

Such a beautiful sentiment...I often try to picture the people for whom poems have been written; and then squander the poet's devotion...they are always aesthetically beautiful, but internally rancid. I am so sorry you were hurt by what was the promise of a love everlasting.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Hi Kimmer, Thanks. More than once I may add!

[Heather]

bliss!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thanks Heather I can but offer!

[afra]

beautiful and sweet .....great write

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thanks Afra

[Pól]

John This is absolutely beautiful. I read it to my partner, Lisa and it took her breath away. It is the perfect love poem.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Paulo, I gave her what I offered but she left me! It is quite an accolade for you to share it with your parner. Thanks my friend! But lock your back door there a Mexicans at large lol!

[Pól]

More fool her! Does that village have a second set of stocks?/

[John Alexander McFadyen]

She was a rescue 'dog'like many of my women I have been told! No second stocks as we can only deal with one itinerant at a time. Funny the Mexican asked last night if HE could borrow them!

[Cerise]

aww..its very sweet..:)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thanks!