Take Me to the City

Traverse City will do!

Take Me to the City

Take me to the city with you

and I will give you adoration.

I will be your slave,

all bronzed flesh

willing to satisfy.

I will be your light

from the dark,

no white bits,

your rainbow

after the storm.

Take me to the city

and I will beg

at your gates

to let me enter heaven

on this earth

where I will worship you.

 

26/08/12

Reviews

[afra]

great write ....i enjoyed it

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Glad you enjoyed Afra. Thanks

[Yheela]

Walk the streets of passion.
Love it!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Yheela you are my warrior queen. Thank you and it means so much that you like what I write.

[Mia]

This is incredible, just incredible!
"Take me to the city
and I will beg
at your gates
to let me enter heaven
on this earth
where I will worship you."
I mean come on!!!!!!! Too much amazingness!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Well thank you Mia I am overwhelmed at your wonderful reaction.

[Mia]

Pleasure :)

[Lily Mae]

Powerful and yet submissive.. giving all you've got to please another..and yet deep inside knowing your hunger and desires also get feed.. kind of a great sexual gluttonous feeling lol..x I love it.. and I just noticed you said Traverse City lol.. xo

[John Alexander McFadyen]

In was thinking about you at the time!!

[Lily Mae]

Your sexy sweet :) thank you :) xo

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ok a rhyme. Do you want to ............................

[Lily Mae]

I'm at a loss.. rhyme???

[John Alexander McFadyen]

sweet,...meet!!!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Take me to the city!

[TheAdamBryant]

wow , this is a nice love poem , really good

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Tnx Alex I am glad you like it.