I Carve Out My Heart

I carve out my heart.

I carve out my heart, tear it from my chest
And offer it to you from sinner’s hands
That you may kiss it moist with blood red lips
And tend to its deep mortal wounds;
That you may caress it wet between your thighs
To heal the scars that savage beings made
And pump it full of life to make it beat again.

07/07/10

Reviews

[spiritwind]

John McFadyen, You pick your words very carefully, don't you? Every word seems to pulsate with intertwined meanings. You are magnificently sensual even with raw pain... wow!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you 'Spirit' for such a lovely comment.

[Lost in Wonderland]

wow, truly deep and beautiful and like someone said raw! A bit sensual at one point too. I can relate to this. Someone with a dark and deeply wounded heart that needs the right person to heal it. Truly lovely right, such depth and beauty in only 7 lines. Amazing job! 100
God Bless
~Mickey

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Wow Mickey thank you for such a fantastic review. It is so worthwhile when someone enjoys what you write and gets it. Many thanks.

[Lost in Wonderland]

No problem, thank you for the incredible additin to this site:)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Now I am blushing!!!!!!!! But with a warm glow. Thank you again Mickey.

[Lost in Wonderland]

:)no problem at all!

[Junert]

Hmm

[Lily Mae]

Wow.. I'm speechless.. this is raw and powerful.. I sooo like it..xo Offering from sinners hands to healing the inner thighs scars.. excellent write...x

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Raw makes for passion. Thanks Lily!

[Lily Mae]

:)

[afra]

beautiful and deep ...well done

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you afra.

[Lisa Ring]

Beautiful and intense thoughts, as always.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

C'est Moi mon Cherie!

[Lisa Ring]

Oh, now I am your Cherie and your Mate :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Nice combination!

[Lisa Ring]

Most definitely.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ecrivez-vous d'amour ou de poignards ?

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Anyway could do with both right now-a cherie and a mate and some cherries, and some chilled white wine and sand and sun on naked skin. Should do some work!