I Carve Out My Heart

I Carve Out My Heart

A Poem by John Alexander McFadyen

I carve out my heart.

I carve out my heart, tear it from my chest
And offer it to you from sinner’s hands
That you may kiss it moist with blood red lips
And tend to its deep mortal wounds;
That you may caress it wet between your thighs
To heal the scars that savage beings made
And pump it full of life to make it beat again.


07/07/10

© 2012 John Alexander McFadyen


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So raw. beautiful.

Posted 11 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

11 Years Ago

Lovely review Amar. My many thank yous.
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Wow. Could not be more dead on for what I crave from love from a woman. This is simply stated, perfect to describe any situation of heartache. Love it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

11 Years Ago

Thank you, thank you, thank you X once again!
warning: not to be recited over a hearty meal!

Posted 11 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

11 Years Ago

Ooops sorry Sheema!
Like this, John uses a more traditional verse form me and romantic imagery. Good one.

Posted 11 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

11 Years Ago

Hi Leslie, I use no form. I have no understanding of poetic form and simply write from my soul. many.. read more
Carves an eternal depth of love n submission... Nice !

Posted 11 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

11 Years Ago

Thanks
A carefully selected choice of words, deliberate and effective in dual meaning. Very nice John. You do evoke sensuality even in your pain. I'm liking this one immensely!

Posted 11 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

11 Years Ago

Thank you It felt that way when I wrote it.
Wow wow wow! What an offer!!! Anyone would take it up immediately. This is just one of your best ever! My favourite.

Posted 11 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

11 Years Ago

Thank you, thank you, thank you Divya!
i agree with the changeful storm...the depth and the metaphor are incredible. this write has a life of its own.

Posted 11 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

11 Years Ago

Thank you Quin. Sorry for the deluge of work but I was yesterday accused of only writing erotic stuf.. read more
a very deep poem, the use of metaphors is fantastic.

Posted 11 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

11 Years Ago

Thank you Neva
Wow, so beautiful and soft. I wish I could write something like this. Very exquistely penned.

Adieu!

Posted 11 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

11 Years Ago

But you do write exquisitie stuff.
Falling Leaf.

11 Years Ago

I'm an okay storyteller. But I feel that when I try to write something short with a big punch, I fee.. read more

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John Alexander McFadyen
John Alexander McFadyen

Brixworth, England, United Kingdom



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