I Fall

I Fall

Like cherry petals

or the tears of warm rain drops

I fall forever.

Reviews

[Fergie]

I know how much you hate form but this is a great example of a haiku because of the use of nature as expression. I like it.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

You are reading my poetry? I never send you and James read requests because I just think you would not want to read my crazy rumblings! Thanks Jess.

[Fergie]

You did send me read requests! And I have a gander every now and then

[SHEEMA HUQ]

i like very much

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thanks Sheema a gentle piece I hope.

[Andie]

We all fall at some point in our life.
Very well put. Nice job, John. :3

[Andorianskye]

beuatiful

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Xleana

[spiritwind]

mmmmmmmmmm..... this is lovely, John McFadyen
odd how evocative cherry blossom petals are...
makes one dream of gentle landscapes
and persuasive fragrance

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Yes that is my sort of thought and mixed with the purity of rain. Many thanks SW.

[quinfinn]

perfection in simplicity!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Often the case, you are so right Quin. Many thank yous

[quinfinn]

welcome!

[Leslie Philibert]

Like this - stands as it is !

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you simple is sometimes all.

[DIVYA]

There can be many interpretations here...but I think you meant falling in love?
Tears of warm raindrops is awesome.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

As always you read my emotions and I feel very honoured. Many thank yous sweet Divya.

[DIVYA]

Thanks John! Its a pleasure to read you :)

[Aly]

I understood the comparison but wasn't sure of your statement
"I fall forever"

but I guess if I really thought about it, it just means falling. Not for anything or anyone. Just deciding to fall. That's what I got out of it.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

You got it gal!

[Aly]

Oh! Great! Good job on it! :)