God Particle

God Particle

Collide.

Smash to destruction

all that is created;

to be born again.

To rise with majesty,

and triumph over God

with your science.

If only Darwin had known

such liberation,

the freedom to believe.

Prove your point

that earthly creatures of dust

have set and formed

from cellestial treacle.

Have ruled this speck

in the void of man’s univesrse,

a place created by man

simply because he believes it so.

And yet his lack of self belief,

his grave and earnest doubt,

drives him to seek,

if not his God,

his particle of faith.

 

25/01/12

Reviews

[AYVID N]

Man will never find all the answers and he will always seek out God! Thats coz he was made in the very likeness of God! I really appreciate your bringing up this much debated issue with such impressive words! 100/100

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I am spoiled by your attention and kindness Divya. Inspired by reading 'This Thing of Darkness' about Darwin and Fitzroy and reading about the search for the Higgs Boson.

[quinfinn]

you may find this odd, but i was reminded of the Jethro Tull album "aqualung" and the poetry on the back cover which basically spoke of man creating God in his own likeness as opposed to the traditional rendering of the same passage. i love this write.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Yes I know what you mean. Many thanks Quin.

[Sirius King]

great write, it definitely makes you think

thanx for sharing

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Many Thanks

[Falling Leaf.]

Very thought provoking. I myself think the big bang theory is ridiculous. Thanks for sharing!


Adieu!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

not sure what I think really but just feel lucky to be able to lol

[Falling Leaf.]

True. But the thought of what's after death is an eery one.

[amarlaksh]

well good poem. But i am an atheist, so i can only say this much that its very well written.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Amar

[Frieda P]

OMD....I read the god within ourselves. As always, poignant and prolific.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Frieda, just shocked that Leigh thought me so shallow and only focussed on sex!

[Frieda P]

maybe she was just fussin' with you, hey, we all KNOW you're brilliant! That fragile male ego, tsk tsk. ;-)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

No she was being straight and I don't want to be in anyones box lol

[Frieda P]

I'm not even touching that one!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Wise lass raise your glass and take it..with a pinch of salt lol

[LA Lorena]

I'll refrain from touching it as well. I'm practicing up for the new years resolution to stop being such a smart a*s. ;)

[Frieda P]

How will we recognize you then? ;-)

[LA Lorena]

easy. I'll be the one who isn't here.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Don't you dare go!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Oh and it wasn't Leigh who called me a 'tart' it was Leslie lol

[Frieda P]

My gawd John, get over it, your knickers have been in a twist long enough, now....put on your big boy pants now! We know that you are brilliant! ;-)

[Lisa Ring]

That is the nature of existence, isn't it? Creation and destruction, always changing, seeking what is already there yet is not understood because our minds cannot comprehend its mutating existence. Brilliant.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Lisa. You are so kind to me. I am honoured; many thanks.

[Anonymous Girl]

I love astronomy, especially stars! :) keep writing. Really good :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you so much!

[Anonymous Girl]

Its okay :)

[Yheela]

The universe is such an incredible place!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

It truely is and for an instant we are part of it.