At Night...

At Night...

A Poem by Passingdaze

My skin is melting

I must be all alone again...

 

The drugs are changing me,

Turning me into someone else.

 

Nocturnal,always dreaming...

 

Always alone.

© 2010 Passingdaze


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I think this accurately sums up the distinction between controlling the drugs you take and allowing them to control you. It's too a slim tightrope to walk with complacency, and most drugs cause complacency, (or at least manic distractions like paranoia!), and then things go wrong and you feel isolated and depressed, so you take more drugs to cope, which makes you even more apathetic...it's a bit of a downward spiral that keeps people as stuck in their ways as the parents, peers and 'straights' they usually set out to oppose and/or rebel against! (Can you tell I'm talking from experience?) Thought provoking in very few, well placed anguished words, take care, spence

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I think this accurately sums up the distinction between controlling the drugs you take and allowing them to control you. It's too a slim tightrope to walk with complacency, and most drugs cause complacency, (or at least manic distractions like paranoia!), and then things go wrong and you feel isolated and depressed, so you take more drugs to cope, which makes you even more apathetic...it's a bit of a downward spiral that keeps people as stuck in their ways as the parents, peers and 'straights' they usually set out to oppose and/or rebel against! (Can you tell I'm talking from experience?) Thought provoking in very few, well placed anguished words, take care, spence

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this....
alot alot.
i can feel that
you put alot of emotion
and time into this piece of
work. and i find it to be
dazzling. (: great write.:D
youz are ze artizt. iz thinz zis.youz know. xD

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Passingdaze
Passingdaze

Blacksburg, VA



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I am 34 years old. I live in Southwest Virginia. I am a musician and I also love to write and read poetry. I especially enjoy strange and deeply personal writing. To my friends on this site: Please re.. more..

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