Shadows

Short little poem I wrote recently

The thought escapes me
And turns into an empty stare
Another scar or tale untold
Another breath I was never supposed to take

The shadows will hide me
From the voices that I still hear
I will let them inside
I will let them bind me

Reviews

[S.S.P.]

you can murder (in a great way) an emotion with precision markus. you've found what everyone else is lacking. good job once again.

[Dana Shefelbine]

very bone chilling,
very to the point.

[No Longer Writing Here]

Painful memories are the hardest to deal with. You've just about nailed what "numbing" can do - "I will let them bind me"