not enough

Reverse perspective after another fight

you are stupid, you have ruined my life

I am the only one who does anything right

 

I do everything for you, you do nothing for me

I don't care if you did all you could, it's not enough

 

there are spots on the carpet, my car needs the oil changed

what do you mean you didnt make it to the market today?

 

You are the most self centered b***h I know

all I want you to do is take care of me right now

 

we need to mow, the grass is too high

make sure you take care of that, I will be home late tonight

 

You dont make enough money, you are are horrible wife

I spit in your face as I yell, all you hear is that you SHOULD DIE

 

in the morning he finds his wife lifeless and blue

 do you think he will regret any words .................. maybe a few?

Author's Note

reverse perspective, and no I am not suicidal ... revised a bit.. fixed some stuff...lol

Reviews

[James Paulin]

This poem is unusual. I like it written in a negative fashion to reflect the emotion felt but such a sad ending with little remorse is hard to take. Unfortunatly, it is true at times. Nice work. I tried this style once myself'.

[Shadow666]

This is very creative, I liked it. :D