Buried alive

A hug, a kiss, these I miss

A snuggle, a sigh, they were all lies

 

That look, that shudder, there is no other

That fist, that threat, they only serve to cement

 

My feelings, my desires, pushed deep inside

My love, my wants, ......   Buried alive

Reviews

[Wondering Mind]

Powerful and the rhythm added to the effect. Very nicely done.

[~angelalala~]

i love this poem. short but so powerful. flow is smooth as silk. and the words are so strong. its a darkly beautiful & moving piece.

[poetforlife]

Wow, this was very powerful, very deep and very sad. Funny how sometimes you can say so much with so few words. You did a great job on this one. Thanks for sharing.

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Nice poem. Check out the verse below. Did you mean fears or feels?
Check out my I'm Alive!