Skittles and Coke

Skittles and Coke

A Poem by PasDeChat
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Cleaned up the kids room.. gees... more of a vent than a poem.

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When the door wouldnt open more than a crack

I knew what was inside would be a huge task

 

Clothes on the floor, cups 'round the room

I begin picking up, even found 3 spoons

 

What the heck is that smell?  from where does it come?

Do all teen age boys live like this in their homes?

 

Coke spilled on the carpet, Skittles under the bed

from the drapes that was underwear that fell on my head!?

 

© 2008 PasDeChat


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i like your wit & sense of humor. this is another charming little poem. so true. "What the heck is that smell? from where does it come? Do all teen age boys live like this in their homes?" i'm pretty sure they do.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LOL that's what my room looks like XD I even have dorritos on the floor...gotta clean it today >.< a few spelling errors.

Hugh = huge*
Cloths = clothes*

But other than that an entertaining piece. Really cute ^^. And so true!

MMFCL,
Malizzious.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 10, 2008
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