I Can Fly

The sun in my hair, the wind in my face

My feet on the ground would be my disgrace

I pray not to stumble, forbiden to fall

When my feet hit the ground, I know I must crawl

I circle above, my head held high

I just want to reach out and touch the sky

Reviews

[A]

I love this poem! Short and sweet. The words just flow and mesh together very well! Great poem and I love the writing! :)

[O!]

I love it when so much is said in such few words.....

i felt what was being said.

Lovely.

x,
O!

[Vertigo]

hmm beautiful

[Adela Muresan]

This is so beautiful...
I like the fact that you present rather common emotions in such a beautiful imagery, and btw the pic is a perfect match :D .

A.M.

[poetforlife]

I thought this was wonderfully penned. Sometimes we go through moments of disgrace where we have to crawl before we can get back up again but that's the beauty of this life. We DO get back up. Well done! Thanks for sharing.