The Bond Is Too Dear

Bond between me and my cousin..Instant writing in a bus ;)

The bond we share is too dear
Spending time together is no fear
Lots of talks, lots of movies
Shes a gossip girl ..I am just a rookie
Sleepover with her is so much fun
We cant stop talking cause we are too young
The thing we have noticed the most
when we meet something strange do happen at any cost
Either its falling from a scooter or her fear of dogs is way too cuter
Everything that happen is so rare
We are so clumsy, We don't care
Sometimes its so funny to remember all that
She is a cousin we should have a good laugh
The bond we share is too dear
Spending time together is no fear !

Reviews

[Joseph Tafoya]

i love it and i do not know i am sure it is from your perspective right?but there is some things i see that needs fixing but all in all it a great piece of work you got here and i enjoy your talent maybe you can teach me a few things haha but really i enjoy your work keep it up.

[Parul Sharma]

Yes exactly ..my perspective...I am new here and started writing just now ..well thank you so much :) Glad you liked it haha you r talented as well

[Joseph Tafoya]

Haha no problem I like helping out new and old writers on here I also new here my self and haven't put nothing up latley but you did a pretty good job keep it up and thx

[Parul Sharma]

haha thank you :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

A very sweet dedication..The flow of words is smooth..
Liked how you transformed the little joys of companionship with the kin to a pure wonder of words..
You really love her! Well done! :)

[Parul Sharma]

Oh Thank you very much..I am so happy that you liked it ..and also thanks fo for reviewing it ..Yes ,Indeed i lover her

[Surya pradha]

great flow. makes for a splendid read

[Parul Sharma]

Glad you enjoyed it..Thanks :)

[Kajal Sharma]

that was such great poem...i loved it so much especially she is gossip girl and i am a rookie..haha