We'll make things alright

We'll make things alright

A Poem by Parul Sharma
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We argue , We fight
But, Afterall We are sisters we make things alright
I was so small i didnt knew
She was my only frnd till i started school
We both got big and things change by our sides
Its just a mystery why things cant get alright
She got married, She had a new life
I was happy but with some tears in my eyes
I have said some things which was bad
but she forgot everything just like that
Now shes taking a flight.I miss those fights ..I am sure she miss it too.. Because Afterall we are sisters we'll make things alright

© 2015 Parul Sharma


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A beautiful poem for the relationships of the sisters.
"Now shes taking a flight.I miss those fights ..I am sure she miss it too.. Because Afterall we are sisters we'll make things alright "
We will miss the arguments and time spend together. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Parul Sharma

9 Years Ago

Shared some real feelings all cause of my sister..thank you so much for ur kind words..glad u enjoye.. read more
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

I understand the poem. I had six brothers.
Parul Sharma

9 Years Ago

Separation is really difficult to accept .



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i like it alot from the start to the end,you put somthing most sisters growing up in a short and happy poem here, you are very talented.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Parul Sharma

9 Years Ago

Just gave it a try ..Thank you so much for reviewing and the encouragement ...Sisters are like this .. read more
Joseph Tafoya

9 Years Ago

Haha yea and I'll try but still it's a good story
'I was happy but with some tears in my eyes'
Love this line!
Well done!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Parul Sharma

9 Years Ago

Thank you Emily!! ..All because of my sister :)
I love the ending....you are sisters and in the end you will make things right....nice poetry and thank you for sharing your talent.

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Parul Sharma

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much Jane ..I am glad you enjoyed it..I have just started writing and this encouragemen.. read more
thoughts, feelings and emotions of a sister are well very conveyed in this fine write! well done! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Parul Sharma

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much...My feelinare real because of my sister ..Glad u liked it!
Indra Neil

9 Years Ago

u r most welcome! :)
A fine poem about the bond between sisters!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Parul Sharma

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)
Michael Stevens

9 Years Ago

You're quite welcome!
Very sweet... a relationship between sisters

Posted 9 Years Ago


Parul Sharma

9 Years Ago

Thanks :) this relation is something special !
Sultrysoul

9 Years Ago

Yes it is. Thank you for sharing
I Loved it!
Its penned with so pure and loving emotions that it touches the right chord.
Very relatable.. Since I myself have a darling sister..! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Parul Sharma

9 Years Ago

Glad you loved it! Thank you so very much dear . As I am new here thanks for the encouragement...We .. read more
siblings tend to fight sometimes - some more than others - but in most cases the love between them continues to shine through...it's all a part of being family...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Parul Sharma

9 Years Ago

Exactly... thats what i said things wil be alright ..
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9 Years Ago

yes, indeed
great poetry :) well done...we fight with people we love but we can't live without them

Posted 9 Years Ago


Parul Sharma

9 Years Ago

I am glad you liked it..Thank you so much for reviewing
Kajal Sharma

9 Years Ago

pleasure is all mine...

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Added on August 5, 2015
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Parul Sharma
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Chandigarh, Chandigarh, India



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