Time

No sooner are we aware, we are already taken by time

In the years of my youth,
There was only one truth,
You live and you die

Nothing was said, about the future,

We were all living in the now,

A pretty girl, 17 years old

took my hand and my heart was sold

That's when my heart was on fire,
Her baby blue eyes and my desire

Her pretty smile and her lovely voice

I guess that's why she was the angels choice

Cause Time is everlasting, but we are not

Her stone said "A Wonderful Girl",

She was apart of his whole world

Underneath that willow tree up high

The crooked branches sticking out,
He's on his knees and hes crying now

"You should've took me instead",

stood up, and whispered amen

Author's Note

Now I know the rhyme scheme is off, let me know what could be done to perfect this.

Reviews

[Stan Lee]

I don't know how you could have made this better.. It is amazing! Very moving.
thanks for sharing :)