You + Me = Eternity

I will love you like the sea
I will send you my waves to kiss on your feet
When you sit on the shore I will make you complete
And if you plunge in my heart very soon you will see
I have treasures for you deep down within me.

I will love you like a book
It will be the tale of our sweet N’ silly plans
I will enjoy your smile and the warmth of your hands
And if there is pain it won’t last at all
I will absorb your tears in my pages if they fall.

I will love you like a song
I will give you hope when you are feeling low
Right through your ears to your heart I will flow
It will be my home where you will find me
I need your heartbeat to be my melody.

I will love you like the air
The air that you breathe right into your core
The breeze that have softly touched you before
I may seem so frail as if no one is there
But if you can feel me I am everywhere.

I will love you like anything
All that I know is you are only mine
So I am saying these words form up here cloud nine
I am no one and I don’t want to be
Nothing else matters when you are right here with me
Saying,

“You + Me = Eternity”.

Reviews

[Kristin Brecoe]

Alright, my suggestions and whatnot are in brackets.

I will love you like the sea
I will send you my waves to kiss on your feet [this line was a little awkward to read]
When you sit on the shore I will make you complete
And if you plunge in my heart very soon you will see
I have treasures for you deep down within me.

I will love you like a book
It will be the tale of our sweet N' silly plans
I will enjoy your smile and the warmth of your hands
And if there is pain it won't last at all
I will absorb your tears in my pages if they fall.

I will love you like a song
I will give you hope when you are feeling low
Right through your ears to your heart I will flow
It will be my home where you will find me
I need your heartbeat to be my melody.

I will love you like the air
The air that you breathe right into your core
The breeze that have softly touched you before
I may seem so frail as if no one is there
But if you can feel me I am everywhere.

I will love you like anything
All that I know is you are only mine
So I am saying these words form[from] up here cloud nine
I am no one and I don't want to be[kinda random, messes with the poems gorgeous flow]
Nothing else matters when you are right here with me
Saying,

"You + Me = Eternity".

ahh, i enjoyed reading that again...i want this in my favorites!

[Kristin Brecoe]

aww. this is so sweet. i enjoyed it. =] made me feel happier to read these feelings.
so you know there were a few typos in here. maybe reread is and find them?

-kristin

[Barry S. Maltese]

I love this poem like an ode to true love
Like words that engulf life and it's true meaning of true love. You created an awesome piece of poetry here. I enoyed reading it - and how it can compare to so many parts of life as a whole. Good work