Eyes

Eyes

A Poem by Kathryn Smith

I caught your gaze


And


If your eyes could speak


What would they say?


My heart is a fire


And my soul the smoke


Rising


Above ashes


I have looked all over


For you

© 2017 Kathryn Smith


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We search our lives away for that one person. Often it turns out to be many that we are compatible with

Posted 6 Years Ago


One look can make us do so much.. It is incredible to be looked at and the gaze takes over everything inside of you..

Posted 6 Years Ago


I started this, loving it . . . but my love for your message grows & grows, until the ending sentiment that resonates with so much that I've felt in my life: "I have looked all over for you" . . . this could mean a special person or it could mean God or it could mean finding one's own truth (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


Kathryn Smith

6 Years Ago

Awwww shux. Thank you Barelygirl! :) It was about this man in church who caught my eye...and we had .. read more
barleygirl

6 Years Ago

Many times I write with one narrow idea in mind, but reviewers show me delightfully different ways t.. read more
Ah exquisite
I love this truly

Posted 6 Years Ago


Kathryn Smith

6 Years Ago

Thank you! :D I really like it too. xx
So beautiful, this is very well written and expressed.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Kathryn Smith

6 Years Ago

Thank you! :D
Beautifully done, full of passion. Our eyes, the windows to our soul and to our hearts. Amazing, very well done!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Kathryn Smith

6 Years Ago

Aww well thank you very much for stopping by to read my work! :D
Those eyes. When someone want to tempt us. Those eyes can steal our mind and our heart. Thank you Kathryn for sharing your amazing words and thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


Kathryn Smith

6 Years Ago

Thank you Coyote! :D Your words always mean a lot to me. xx
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

You are very kind and you are welcome my friend.
Superb Kathryn! Wistful, yearning, hopeful, eloquent. Brava!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Kathryn Smith

6 Years Ago

Thank you very much Annette! :) Cheers. Hope you had a great new year! xx
Annette Pisano-Higley

6 Years Ago

You’re very welcome dear. Happy New Year to you! Xo
i loved this.. beautiful..

Posted 6 Years Ago


Kathryn Smith

6 Years Ago

Aww thank you! :)

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Added on November 29, 2017
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