Forever (Ft Tony Jordan)

A collaboration with Tony. A Poem about lovers. It was an honour to work with such an incredible poet. Big love to him. :)

She fell

Unarmed and unaware

He caught her

And he struck

Match after match

Until she could feel

See

Hear

Touch

Taste

Breathe

He carried her 

as she cooed

and the darkness 

that consumed

them both...

Gone

Instantly 

Forever

Forever in a spark

And forever love

grew

Inside their hearts

Their souls

Their minds and words

Never apart

Reviews

[Gee]

I don't fu#!/+g believe it, honest to God. As soon as my backs turned the pair of you are off, skulking in the shadows like Mr and Mrs Skulker from Skulkingtonshire. Planning, penning, posting a little duvet, no that ain't a typo, you two have been undercover, sneaky bedfellows......
For 17 years I have asked, begged, beseeched, implored ol' Tone to grant me the honour of a collab' , but no, niet, not a shagging chance, and then I see this.....GUTTED, with a capital GEE

[Tony Jordan]

*Shouts* - "Kathryn darling....it's that awful man from next door again...eh..?....yes the one who keeps trying to lick his ba*ls in the garden. What?? What do you mean he's here to deliver a vag mirror from the AVON catalogue...? ~@#*++$~#"& !!!!!!

[Gee]

Lol, how ya doing buddy ??

[Tony Jordan]

All the better for seeing you dude!
Yayy for the weekend - how's the job coming along?

[Gee]

Busy, busy, but settling in. Still trying to get to grips with it all. Cheers

[Kathryn Smith]

Ooooohhh Gee..Don't be too sad. ;) I'm sure T will let you work with him someday. lol

[Gee]

To late, gonna find myself someone else......oooo eee TK MAXXXXXX, where are yoooooooou

[mercy party]

you two really lit a fire. excellent as it had a bright feel, it made me happy in other words, the comradery really was apparent in this poem.

[Tony Jordan]

Wow M.P. !!
I think that's the best compliment we could have gotten in a review of this. read moreWow M.P. !!
I think that's the best compliment we could have gotten in a review of this.
Thank you so much. Kathryn was the driving force and motivated me so full credit to her.
Thank you very much my friend.
:)))

[Kathryn Smith]

haha..oh I like your choice of words! "Made a fire." I think I'd have to agree. :) xxo

[Giulia King]

Lovely flow, excellent choice of words! A really sweet poem :)

[Kathryn Smith]

Thanks very much! I thought it flowed quite nicely too. (I like your hair btw) lol

[Kathryn Smith]

We both thank you. x

[Giulia King]

Lol, that's so sweet of you!! Thank you :)

[Kathryn Smith]

I'm one of those people who went through a really crappy break up and decided to chop her hair off and get a brand new hairstyle..and so now I look a bit like Taylor Swift and I miss my long hair. lol It'll grow back though. ;)

[Giulia King]

Omg, I did the same thing! He loves long hair so I cut my hair short, a couple of years ago. I hated it! But it made me hate my ex more lol. It will grow back, drink lots of water :)

[Kathryn Smith]

Haha oh man! I feel you! Waterrr

[Kathryn Smith]

lol I just noticed my comment was cut off. I meant to say watterrr! I live for water. my mother says I drink it like a fish. lol

[Giulia King]

I was like; Yes... waterrr lol. I drink a lot of water too, cheers lol

[Tabby Mac]

I love the idea that he brought a her senses back or made them come alive! A very romantic piece! Kudos to you both! Very thought out and expressive! Love how they become one too!! LOVE!!
Tabby

[Tony Jordan]

Hi Tabby.
Your exhuberant review is really energising.
I'm chuffed that you loved this. Thank you so much for saying so.
:))

[Ardra]

He caught her

And he struck

Match after match

Until she could feel

See

Hear

Touch

Taste

Breathe

Wonderfully penned.....could feel them fall in love with each move :)

[Tony Jordan]

Ria it's great to see you gracing this poem's page !
I'm so glad you could feel this one.
read moreRia it's great to see you gracing this poem's page !
I'm so glad you could feel this one.
Thank you for your lovely review my dear friend.
:))

[Tony Jordan]

Thank you so much my dear friend.
:)

[Ashwin Shanker]

Really romantic. Well done

[Kathryn Smith]

Thanks Ashan! :)

[Ken Simm.]

As I always do with collaborations, (paticularly with male female one's) I tried to discover the joins. It is a testament to the quality of this that said joins are invisible.
A remarkable, romantic write that I found very optomistic in style and tone. Excellent work.

[Kathryn Smith]

AH thank you so much Ken! I guess when they say great minds think alike they aren't kidding. :) Tony was a joy to work with..

[aLittlePain]

A very nice collab, smooth. Well done you two! R xo

[Kathryn Smith]

Thanks very much! I'm glad you liked it. Working with T was a pleasure.. I think he brought depth to this poem.

[Tony Jordan]

Sorry i missed this review Rach. Thank you. It was a great craic collab'ing with Kathryn.
:))

[aLittlePain]

Good craic! ;)

[Tony Jordan]

The craic was 90.
lol

[aLittlePain]

Hahaha.....

[Lyn Anderson]

Very nice collab, nice use of words and form. Quite seamless between writers.

[Tony Jordan]

Thank you KL.
It was a lovely experience to collab with Kathryn. She made it such a pleasure.
Thank you for your lovely words my friend.
:)

[Kathryn Smith]

Thanks for the review! :) I had such fun making this with T. Its like liquid it's so gorgeous. I am pleased with the result and I am glad you like it. xx

[Sadie]

This speaks so strongly of the great oneness of love. It reminds me of a couple of lines from 'Love Song' by Rainer Maria Rilke
'Upon what instrument are we two spanned
And what musician hold us in his hand?'
Beautiful:)

[Tony Jordan]

God, Sadie what a wonderful quote and review.
It's deeply appreciated.
Kathryn is a wonderful poet and inspiration. Thank you for reviewing.
:)

[Sadie]

My pleasure. Great work:)

[Kathryn Smith]

Thanks Sadie! I'll have to listen to that song. :) I still think Tonys picture looks like the moon..and looking at the moon makes me feel romantic. That must have been my motive to create this with him. LOL

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

It was beautiful and delightful. The mind and words of those who are together binded by an eternal emotion can never cut loose. Time is nothing but a treasure box waiting for you to search into it. Love does not grow I believe, it simply blossoms, growth means to me that it never was anything big to begin with, yet love was always there, before, now and after, therefor, it simply blossoms, unwrapping the hidden gifts and connection between others.

[Tony Jordan]

Holy Crap Sir Drift. Your review is better than the poem. Such eloquence. You must post this as a poem, it's beautiful and beautifully received dear poet.
Would like to see another collab of yours and Ana's soon.
Much respect Sir.
Thank you.

[Kathryn Smith]

Omg Sir Drift..this is a brilliant review. Thanks so much! :)

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

You poets honor me, from poet to poets you are both amazing and I am glad to see that collabs are starting to flourish! When will I have the honor of collaborating with such brilliant minds?

[Kathryn Smith]

I'll do a collab with you! :D Feel free to msg me. x I'd love to get to know you as well. :)