Goddess

You should've crowned her

Because she's a Goddess

 

You never got this

Her brown eyes a hurricane

Full of furry

Of spirit

Of wildness

Of heart

Oh her heart

It churns and beats

Beats and churns

Races

Mourns

Creates heat

Stones in her throat

You watched her burn

Scorned

She was crashing

Smashing

Thrashing at your door

Do you want some more?

Your jar of hearts

Letters on the floor

Weak you say

and weak you'll be

Didn't you know

She could've saved you that day

But you just let it repeat

The choices you make

It is misery you embrace

Terrible mistakes

Women you waste

We pave the way

We will tie your name to a stake

Light it on fire

and in the flames

We will smile

Smile at the b*****d

He was never deserving

The title of "man"

If you mess with a Goddess

It is in hell

He will stand

A Goddess has heart

and a heart she will keep

Her love runs deep

Promises to keep

Perhaps no man will love her

For only a Godly man will see her

and a Godly man will know her

It will take a real man

To keep her

Finally surfaced above the downs
Feeling her boldest she came around
 Because she's a goddess

She finally saw this

Author's Note

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

i must consider 'tis write one of my fav. for sure!

the way how you speak the reality of cruelty undisguised is quite very much intriguing. you showing the worth of women as well as the value of real man here around in such deep words. yes, i agree, only a real man can be a keeper of her heart cos the rest of the ones are only longed tp chew the every ounce of her beats. very artistically written!

[Sarah]

Beautiful poem. Sometimes a woman needs to know her strength and her worth. I really liked the line "If you mess with a Goddess, it is in hell he will stand." Keep up the good work!

[PoeticSorcery]

interesting style and rhyme. a surprise to be sure, not familiar with it, which is a nice change of pace.

[Lorry]

And maybe you hit the nail on the head with the non deserving part. We knock ourselves down because of what others fail in, not because there is reason to knock ourselves. When we live in such a hectic, throwaway society, people are rushed by life into making immediate judgements and not having the knowledge or awareness of others to realise just how cruel those instant decisions can be. You would have been their goddess, if they were worthy. Beautifully written, with just the right amount of grrrr :)