Your World

When she is lonely

You call her name

and she scuttles into your world

Your voice comforts her

Your words ease her

Your eyes touch her

When she is misunderstood

You fill her heart with joy

You make her understand

You remind her she is only human

When she is sad

You slowly wrap around her aching heart as a blanket

You hug her soul

You are sad with her

but you remind her to keep running

You cheer her up

Making her laugh with glee

When she is breaking

She slips into your world

Your world of bravery

Of courage

Of truth

Of reality

You sew her pieces back together

You and she are quite alike

When she is restless

You whisper to her

You cuddle her close

You lull her to sleep

She'll wake with a happy hopeful smile

Your world is her world

and in your world she will remain

Author's Note

Reviews

[Sebastian Falzarano]

Well written. There are no errors that I can see. All in all, this is an excellent poem. It flows smoothly without lines to interrupt the flow of words. The message that I get from this poem is that the worlds of the two people in a relationship are linked as one: whatever happens to one happens to the other, and both are there to comfort each other. Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem with me.
On another note, I was listening to "I Create" by Audiomachine, and it went well with the poem if it is read slowly. Give it a listen and see what you think.

[dan]

Lines that really jumped out? "When she is sad...you are sad with her.." The care you administer to this unnamed friend (?) is so deep as to be classified as love; so it is love. Could it be you are talking about you taking care of your heart, because we all have to do that a LOT. The poem/story is a wonderful write. take care...dan

[ANTO]

This person (whom I will refer to as 'the mender') sounds like a guardian angel of sorts yet there is no hint of them being supernatural. I felt the bond between the two but also felt it was a bit one-sided and worried for 'the mender' and their well-being.
I can definitely personally relate to this one Kathryn but I'm not going to divulge in which capacity. ;p

A heartwarming exposition of friendship.

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the journey in your words. Create people, place and need.
"Your world is her world
and in your world she will remain "
The words gentle and worthwhile led the reader to good ending and thoughts. I did like the above line.
Thank you for sharing your outstanding words and thoughts.
Coyote

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Beautiful piece of how love can touch two souls so deeply, as to complete each other.
Mending what nothing can, reviving the soul and bringing hope, love does that all.
Very eloquently penned piece.
Loved the imagery!