Everything I want to tell you:

Everything I want to tell you:

A Story by Kathryn Smith

You.


You, the man who lives miles away has been making me smile ear to ear for the past few days.


I want to tell you that I really like you, but I just can't. I don't know how this even all started.  


I wish you could feel how much I've been aching for you to be here.


I'm so scared. I don't want to be foolish. I know what happens when you confess too soon.


I still can't tell if you feel the same way, but I'm slowly but surely getting the feeling that you actually might like me back.


I've dropped so many hints to make it obvious...and now you have too.


and that's terrifyingly amazing.


The fact that this is happening


that this is real


The fact that we dream up moments together....



it's like you are about to become my very best friend and more..


or Is this just all me? Is it in my head? Sometimes I begin to worry..but then I get the feeling that I shouldn't.


There is no doubt about it.


This is special. Something is going to happen eventually.


I'm still scared...I don't want to let my guard down..but with you? I think I'll finally be able to.


This feeling is so overwhelmingly amazing


It's fleeting and genuine


The last time I felt like this was in Paris.


So I know this is real...


When it's right it's more than right. You just know.


When the time comes...when we get to be face to face for the very first time..


it's going to be amazing.



This is future love.


this just might be it...


and if we play our cards right


We could write a pretty good story together.

© 2015 Kathryn Smith


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That's a very sweet and personal poem. I can't even explain how much I can relate to this and actually I've been feeling like this recently. Not that he's far away, but he's close, but does he really feel the same way about me? I want to ask him, but will it make me look stupid? Will it make me look too desperate? Who knows. But really you never know, until you try, right? I know what you mean, when you said you can actually start to feel if their feeling the same way. I've had that happen and in the end they were feeling the same way about me when I was feeling the same way about them, too. It's crazy how love works!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I would be interested to know what happen next?

Posted 9 Years Ago


Kathryn Smith

9 Years Ago

haha yes!! ...but I'd rather fly there. He lives in a beautiful place! :)
A. Amos

9 Years Ago

just kidding wish you both all the best!
Kathryn Smith

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much! :) I wish you the best as well in whatever you are doing!
This is very sweet and romantic.
I can feel the emotions swimming in this piece, just so much love and emotion.
It seems to me like the feelings are being returned.
Although just be careful, long distance relationships are hard, not many of them work out.
Though if you are a very strong person, and its real love it just might.
Good luck!
Great write!

Posted 10 Years Ago


ahh computer love be careful in what you say
cause the click of a mouse doesn't make it go away

Posted 10 Years Ago


That's a very sweet and personal poem. I can't even explain how much I can relate to this and actually I've been feeling like this recently. Not that he's far away, but he's close, but does he really feel the same way about me? I want to ask him, but will it make me look stupid? Will it make me look too desperate? Who knows. But really you never know, until you try, right? I know what you mean, when you said you can actually start to feel if their feeling the same way. I've had that happen and in the end they were feeling the same way about me when I was feeling the same way about them, too. It's crazy how love works!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sounds very interesting! More?

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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