love this, it draws so much to ponder in light of the meaning, and the overall captivating force of thought which makes the reader feel what the writer is feeling, such subtle passion is effective as well as involving,
there is so much detail to this writing, developed perspective,
upon his table, self aware
little monkeys like marbles
your ability to capture pure metaphor is brilliant, no less than creatively contemplative,
in a sweeping way, your your vision transports one thoughts and emotions, now the ending,
"there is no such thing
as permanence.
what a stunning examination, captures my own thoughts, as well as many I am sure. which is the great
thing about this writing, the way you left it open to specific interpretation, the meaning says,
in my opinion, depicts the moment's happiness, and how most people are self seeking, failing
to recognize how the future is a stake when thinking in such short term manner, very well written,
I love the way this delivers the reader and how it pulls them closer to your world. I like planetary bowling...reference but the message seems to point too live for today for your not sure about tomorrow...Thank you and Michael for sharing this...
love this, it draws so much to ponder in light of the meaning, and the overall captivating force of thought which makes the reader feel what the writer is feeling, such subtle passion is effective as well as involving,
there is so much detail to this writing, developed perspective,
upon his table, self aware
little monkeys like marbles
your ability to capture pure metaphor is brilliant, no less than creatively contemplative,
in a sweeping way, your your vision transports one thoughts and emotions, now the ending,
"there is no such thing
as permanence.
what a stunning examination, captures my own thoughts, as well as many I am sure. which is the great
thing about this writing, the way you left it open to specific interpretation, the meaning says,
in my opinion, depicts the moment's happiness, and how most people are self seeking, failing
to recognize how the future is a stake when thinking in such short term manner, very well written,
I have always been told that all that exist is "Right Now" and that Right Now is already history so living in the moment is the difference between happiness and a dream of... I feel this poem is very good and I love the message and how you delivered it like it was being spoken from the mountain top. Still I agree that when it comes to love all that matters is right now, take it, hold it, love and live it. Excellent Poem!!