Dust

Dust

A Poem by Eve

 

Oars in the moonlight
The dip of my death
in the fingerbowl,
petal filled with prose
and the essence
of rose water,
ring finger fresh
and to the point
the need to wither
and fade in the
glade of winter frost.
 
We are… war.
tossed by the hands
of treachery
men,
bundles upon their backs
sleeping in bootstrap cries
and sipping poetry from ladles
of street mongers, and w****s;
casualties of love.
Scattering  seeds among
 the throngs of drink
and the sway of society.
 
All poets and fools; we are
Walking contradictions,
Ideals;  burst into flame.
Brides, to the nature of
sex and sacrifice.
I long to travel the south
west winds and hold to
the pen of my lover,
be a slave ,
to the white of skin
and the silk of immortal
Moonlight,
Soft upon their breasts,
I will lust for the
pouring rain, and
become dust,
neither lost,
borne, nor dying.

© 2008 Eve


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a wonderful flow and outstanding poetry...

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this. I especially love the part beginning with "I long...until the end." This is philosophical and romantic all tied up in one very well written, emotional write! Bravo, sister!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

well.. i have a new favorite poem.. this is great! I really love this poem rob. I am so impressed by you sometimes
This one was put together from start to finish! see, i love observational..and in different subject matter going from one to the other flawlesesly. Great job..for what its worth, I am very impressed with this one boo


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

well.. i have a new favorite poem.. Is is great! I really love this poem rob. I am so impressed by you sometimes
This one was put together from start to finish! see, i love observational..and in different subject matter going from one to the other flawlessesly. Great job..for what its worth, I am very impressed with this one boo


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I wont try to break up this piece by pushing an interpretation on it, but one thing I can say that is abundantly clear (and won't detract from the message) is the sheer romanticism of it.. I can almost smell the faint scent of roses on a moolight breeze.. Beautiful..

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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