now this poem is absolutely spellbound and left my head swimming in
illusions, a lost in a deja vu moment, subtle, blissful haunting, the
way you open this poem immediataly creates foundation for what
follows, enlightened perspective, spoken eternity, beautiful scenery,
its easy to lose thoughts in this absolutely classic work of heart and
soul passion, very touching, the layout set the piece softly, loved it! mike
Held me enraptured from 1st line to magnificent last Somerista. Images were so vivid and clear I could see, hear, touch and taste every word.....every line.
Flow was steady and peaceful...remembrances of a time fading from view. Fading perhaps, from all but those who continue the lineage. For those of us who view it from afar, thank goodness their are people like you to keep it live and pertinent.
Beautiful, heartfelt, honest write Somerista.
allen
I observe the old ways of my people, so from the very first line, this piece had me entranced. This has such an esoteric feel. I love every line. You are truly a wordsmith.
Amazing... I found my new favorite! Every single word was impeccably placed; artfully expressed. I love how balmy, natural, and vivid this was. Its flow was poetic perfection, the images and descriptions were enchanting and clairvoyant. I was so enamored by each line, I couldn't choose a favorite, you penned this masterfully. I love it!
This is lovely written, inchanting if I may. This is poetry, sweet and flowing with life. Creative display also.
Thank you for entering my contest and the best of luck to you.
now this poem is absolutely spellbound and left my head swimming in
illusions, a lost in a deja vu moment, subtle, blissful haunting, the
way you open this poem immediataly creates foundation for what
follows, enlightened perspective, spoken eternity, beautiful scenery,
its easy to lose thoughts in this absolutely classic work of heart and
soul passion, very touching, the layout set the piece softly, loved it! mike
Such an eloquent piece, It was simply gripping. Your lines amaze me. The more you inspect it the more you gaze in wonder at the powerful words and vivid images. Amazing, simply amazing.