Noon Dreams

Once i slept a fast,

In a dry noon,

I saw the moon,

Like it was my boon.

It was true,

Like a glue,

Stuck my eye,

On the high floating sky.

With a bloom,

In the black room,

With a bright light,

Spreading happiness all over the sight.

In the dawn,

The lakes are quite,

What a beautiful sight,

When the water shines.

The birds are tweeting,

The heat is beating,

Mother came rising me up,

Saying the noon is true.

Reviews

[A LIFE THAT SCARES]

thank you Kossuth Katonaja

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there's that little green notepad icon below the review. that way I get a notification that you replied. lol

you're welcome.

[A LIFE THAT SCARES]

thank you horizon you understood my hardwork behind rhyming

[horizon]

Your rhyming is very nice...keep it up

[D]

I've gotta ask if this is your very first poem.

it's well penned though. full rating v

[A LIFE THAT SCARES]

thank you.................

[Riya patel]

Very well created. Amazing use of words. Good keep writing.