Dance of the Nebula's Melody

My first poem.

I dance under the moonlight.
Spending time in bliss
Rather than the night.
The rays leaves a gentle kiss
While I put up no fight.

The stars are symphony
Of a joyous song.
The melody being carried along the breeze.
I wish it will last all night long.

I rather be prisoner to the natural worlds.
Then the awful humanity
And all its quarrels.
I just wish I was free.

Author's Note

I would love reviews from all you loving people.

Reviews

[Dan p]

it sounds as though luna has blessed you with her magic. Beautiful choice of words, well done!

[Satan's Daughter]

This is beautiful. Your imagery and wordage come together to make a fantastically written piece. I commend you on an amazing write. If you keep writing, I shall keep reading.