Cracking Heart

This is for the HeartBreak Contest

Smile with joy when he kissed me
Felt as I'm flying when he looked at me
Loving the moment when I'm with him
Crack-Crack-Crack
The moment I saw him with her
Maybe I was in a dream
But it was more than just reality-
When
He saw me standing there
Struck as if a lightning have hit
Still as if ice is being formed
Hurt as if someone just stabbed me-
But they did
Right where my heart belongs
And they were the ones I loved
Crack-Crack-Crack
Maybe I'm crying because
I knew that he only loved me for pleasures
Or maybe because everybody told me
What he done behind my back-
But I did not believe in which
Or maybe because I knew...
He never loved me

Author's Note

I am not the best at poems but if you are interested in poems please look at my friend profile Brooklyn.

Reviews

[Ardra]

Very hauntingly true...
How we believe they are the one and then suddenly they stab us from behind....you forget everything...just the moment of betrayal....everything seems to make sense then....all the gossips hit home...it's sad how many people had to go through it...thanks for sharing the same...

[Herman Martin]

you do so well with feeling what you are writing....I can sense the pain that was inflicted...you are a great writer

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Very good And very sad. Words are emotions and poem is realy like cracking heart. i hope you are doing okay.

[K]

How sad that most of us can relate to your poem. Overall, though, it is a poem that tugs as the heartstrings, that dredges up the memories of the past that we so blatantly stowed away in dark corners of the mind, never to be touched again. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us.

[SkyVy]

Thank you for liking it!

[APOORVA]

how i can feel every line of yours...wow !

[SkyVy]

Thank you for liking it!

[Manasa.L]

A beautiful piece of work, mind and thoughts. You really are amazing.

[SkyVy]

Thank you,I am very fond your works!

[Manasa.L]

you are welcome will be looking for some more new works of you

[Brooklyn]

This is AMAZING. There are no other words to describe this work of art.

[Manasa.L]

You are a true friend Brooklyn, promoting a friends writing this is something that we don't get to see these days.