You've Been Warned

You've Been Warned

A Chapter by SwagMaster
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This is the little prologue, or author's (Adri's) note.

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I cannot believe I lost the draw.
That means I have to put this dumb book together, and in my opinion, that is just plain stupid. I wish the others never even thought of this thing.
Honestly, this whole book thing wasn't even my choice, really. It's dangerous...puts out a lot of unnecessary risk. They could track us through this thing, and then we'd all be sorry. Whatever. We voted, and before you can say, "Wait, this idea is incredibly stupid," I'm writing a book. However, you don't have to read it...you have a choice.
If you're still reading this, you've probably just decided to keep reading the entire book.
Congrats.
But don't say I didn't warn you.
'Cause I did. Just now. Reading this book may be dangerous for your health, and I am not responsible. If you feel like this is too scary for you to handle, I don't blame you. I'd put down the book, if I had a choice.
But I don't.
I don't know if I will be able to finish this book; it's a big risk, telling my story.
Someone has to know, though.
Last chance.


© 2012 SwagMaster


Author's Note

SwagMaster
Really short, I know, but this is just designed to hook readers. Enjoy!:)

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Haha, I already like this character. :)

This was a really good start, even though it was so short. It definitely makes me want to read more.

I did see one grammar error. "... and then we'd would be sorry." "We'd" is the conjugation for "we would", so that other "would" is redundant. I would suggest just using "we'd" to stay with the character's voice, but "we would" could also work.

Other than that, nicely done! I'm moving on!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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*swallows nervously* I-I'm ready! Seriously, this gave me an emotional reaction, which is the best thing an author can hope for, to really connect with the readers. And, trust me, i connected.

Posted 12 Years Ago


drew me in big time :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This sounds so great :) Really engaging. Even short it really started the chapter off nicely, so nice going. Totally loving it ^.^

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cooooooool...im hooked

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Its ten o clock at night and I aint puttin this book down till I decide to. -smiles triumphantly- Well then, shall we? LET THE READING BEGIN!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Haha, I already like this character. :)

This was a really good start, even though it was so short. It definitely makes me want to read more.

I did see one grammar error. "... and then we'd would be sorry." "We'd" is the conjugation for "we would", so that other "would" is redundant. I would suggest just using "we'd" to stay with the character's voice, but "we would" could also work.

Other than that, nicely done! I'm moving on!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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