Undisclosed Stipulations

Undisclosed Stipulations

A Poem by Airila

I want the romance.

The type of romance you only see in movies.

The type of thing that every girl dreams for, dreams….but never gets

I want flowers n candy on the first date

I want my chair to be pulled out for me

I want those middle of the night phone calls just to hear the sound of my voice

I want to be kissed in the summer rain

I want to hear “May I have this dance?” even though I can’t dance worth for s**t

I wanna be held close and caressed, even when we’re in front our friends

I don’t just want simple, mind blowing sex, I want the slow, sweet seduction that comes with passionate love making.

And if it ever comes to that point, I want to hear 4 simple yet powerful words while he’s on one knee. Looking deep into my eyes while he asks “Will you marry me?”

Call me old fashioned but is that too much to ask for?

 

© 2011 Airila


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No! it is not too much to ask! And I have no idea why some people just don't get it... 'treat me like a princess!' haha.. but, i am totally understanding.

One thing though:
"I want those middle of the night phone calls just to hear the sound of my voice"
I understand what you mean, but do you mean hear the other persons voice or for you to hear their voice.. the wording is unclear.. it could mean both...
A few suggestions - you could come up with better or leave it the same.
"I want those middle of the night phone calls just for me to hear the sound of your voice"
"I want those middle of the night phone calls just to know you want to hear the sound of my voice"


Other than this, it is great!
I love the simplicity and the depth, and the truth...


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Airila
Airila

Kingston, Jamaica



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