Beatrice

Beatrice

A Poem by Charlie

She's trapped in her reflection
She is the expectation
But not the exception
The cup is quite the looker 
Yet inside is just as the void in her heart
She is not like the flowing streams of misconception 
Chasing her dreams in a game of tag
Dedicated to catching the cheeky aspirations
She is among the flock
Courage embraces and encourages her to fly
Taking her wings, limbering feathers and soar through the pasty blue hues
The flower in lonely fields is where she lays
Seen but hardly heard upon deaf ears
I believe she is furthermore than her elegance 
Her grace and undeniable beauty
I can see through her like a bride's face through her veil
My sweet escape, my muse, my admiration 
I will keep her here with me, listen to the complaints and joys of life
Like a knight to it's royal heir
On one knee, crouched down with my blade
I recite a pledge that I'll never leave your side 
And remain loyal until the day I'm one with the earth


(I don't know, at this I'm confessing imaginary love.)

© 2024 Charlie


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The void isn't so bad. It may not love you, but you know it doesn't hate you at least.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Your poem shines while conveying the sense of admiration of her and your loyalty,
using entwined images of nature with personal connection, it a heart-provoking poem

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really liked this, the line "Courage embraces and encourages her to fly, taking her wings, limbering feathers and soar through the pasty blue hues" is beautiful, thank you for sharing this.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Charlie

3 Weeks Ago

thank you so much

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Added on October 31, 2024
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Charlie
Charlie

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I'm 16 and a girl, ironic since I have a boy name. I'm a poet and I play an acoustic from time to time. I really like grunge, punk rock music but I enjoy other genres. I sing as well, probably my bigg.. more..

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A Poem by Charlie