Two souls, one body

A thing or two about dedication and love

Take good care of me

Treat like me like me

Love me like I love myself

Love and love me until I blow

Pump me up with never ending affection until I explode

Don't whisper sweet nothings and lonesome

I want you to stick with me for the longtime

Bind our souls

Sew our limbs

And breathe the same air through our collided lungs

To be molded physically and mentally with you is a pleasurable dream

I desire to be yours just as much as you be mine

Forever and ever, our passions intertwine

Look at me through your perfect lenses

View me the best way you can

I'll exchange my sacred for my heart if you do the same

We can be each other's diaries

Bury our secrets and slip them in-between the layers of our brains

Or maybe glue our hands together so we'll never separate

I'm one half and you're the other piece

Let's make it official

Just you and me

Reviews

[Twilight]

Yes, indeed. You've written this piece in one long flow, and it tells quite a lot.

It makes me think, of what a vulnerable woman needs and deserves from a guy. Perhaps, partly inspired from real-life experiences.?

To be sure, the ideal is for a fair and committed partnership between a woman and her man. Often, so much easier said than done; even when a couple think that the chemistry is all there.

Thanks for sharing, Charlie. I accept "read requests" too, on this site.

[Re-Pete]

wow, now that's commitment - inseparable. a pledge of loyalty. two becoming one.