The Flash

The Flash

A Poem by mysticgmekeepr

Men think we are showing them
Our bodies,
When we are really
Revealing our souls

The thinly veiled heart of a women
Lies beneath our breast,
It winks and blinks unexpectedly
In a flash of soft and naked flesh.

© 2013 mysticgmekeepr


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Mystic, your poetry and style is different and refreshing. You're like a painter who finds a new way to paint with meaning and brio. This review applies also to the passing storm which I read before deciding to review this one. Only one small nitpick: In the 1st line of the second verse I'm sure you meant to say "Heart of a woman." That said, It's nice to read poetry that's a bit different. (and well done)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Yes and this is indeed what men find most enchanting.

Posted 9 Years Ago
Mystic, your poetry and style is different and refreshing. You're like a painter who finds a new way to paint with meaning and brio. This review applies also to the passing storm which I read before deciding to review this one. Only one small nitpick: In the 1st line of the second verse I'm sure you meant to say "Heart of a woman." That said, It's nice to read poetry that's a bit different. (and well done)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the picture adds infinite depth to your words

Posted 11 Years Ago

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 Added on June 24, 2013
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mysticgmekeepr
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I am a woman and a child, an adolescent in an older persons shell, an ancient in a child's disguise, a mystery and a metaphor, opposites and contradictions, swirling waters and peace. more..

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