Inspired Breath

surrender to love

unceasing breath

 relentlessly capture cravings

...and when I am beyond weary

you close your eyes whereby

releasing mine own apperceptions

whence I may rest peaceably,

sheltering me against forces

 of brazen daylight

as I indulge the moon,

our hearts whispering amidst

one assentive horizon,

acquiescing powers of affection,

that which e'er dwells 'neath

boundlessly blissed skies' perception,

 far-reaching vitally inspired gestures

 furthermost of depths' sacred surrender

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of thoughts and emotions shared.
" our hearts whispering amidst
one assentive horizon,
acquiescing powers of affection,
that which e'er dwells 'neath
boundlessly blissed skies' perception,"
The above lines. Perfect use of description. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[1VJ]

Thanks so much for your kind review and time Coyote.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Paloma.

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I enjoyed this piece......surrendering to the emotions and beats of the heart that longs to love....

I am an avid fan of this type of Elizabethan language; it is the language of the true poets of the ages, and much harder to write than the standard English of today, hence i use it myself from time to time, despite the haters that appear on here!

Lovely writing!

[1VJ]

Unfortunately, there are haters everywhere, even poetry sites. Thanks for your time and your lovely review!

[Cassie]

Beautifully written. Enjoyed it

[1VJ]

Thanks Cassie!

[h d e rushin]

I am in love with imagery; musical, painting, poetry, all and more I think. Yet I must admit when it
comes in a poem with language and meaningful lexeme, I am more impressed. That's why poetry is the
only "true' distinguished message. What I mean is that even poems of pure illusion, will speak to the soul.

Beautifully written.....dana

[1VJ]

Thanks so much Dana for such a high-spirited review, much appreciated!

[Einstein Noodle]

makes me sigh .. ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh! :)
E.

[1VJ]

I'll take that as high praise E., muchas gracias! :)

[Einstein Noodle]

you are so welcome ..and thank you for posting

[MomzillaNC]

The poem reminds me of that Native American mythical love story between the sun and the moon, especially in these lines:

sheltering me against forces
of brazen daylight
as I indulge the moon,

[1VJ]

I don't know the story but it's quite the compliment in comparison, thanks so much.

[MomzillaNC]

YVW. The story goes that the Sun loved the moon so much that he died each night to give her life, if I remember it correctly.

[1VJ]

Ultimate sacrifice in the name of love, such a beautifully poignant sentiment. Thanks again!

[MomzillaNC]

yvw :D

[Pryde Foltz]

far-reaching vitally inspired gestures
furthermost of depths' sacred surrender

Par excellence, Paloma:)

[1VJ]

Wow, thanks Pryde! :)