Poetrygasm

A cordial, fun scribble

Unfurled within inky passages 

of sensibilities' epic flourish 

pulsating 'tween artful verse, 

sublimely satiating a hunger

'midst tingling spine shivers

exhaled wildly quivered sighs,

lost control it was so orgasmic

definitely the best poetry I ever had

Author's Note

A Harry Met Sally moment...

Reviews

[Richard🖌]

Well, I love it, Milady!
Nothing is more stirring and arousing than sharing warmly sensual poetry with the right poet/poetess.
The imagination can be creatively endless and vivid in the most enthralling ways when expressed with a skilled pen by knowing mind, heart, and soul.
Hah! Obviously, you need no lessons of this from me, as this little jewel is rather breathtaking in itself.
Satirical? Yes! Realistic? Yes, too.

Your skills have definitely caught my discerning eye.
Thank you for a wondrously enjoyable moment shared! 〜 Richard

[1VJ]

I'm thrilled you found both the satire and reality, thanks so much Richard!

[Richard🖌]

A pleasurable joy, Dove! 〜*

[Neville]

Well I have certainly gotta hand it to ya. You made me smile and my spine shudder several times over with these delicious words. Probably my first ever multiple poetrygasm..........N

[DevKass92]

A beautifully written poem that captures both the reality and fantasy of poetry.

[1VJ]

Reality and fantasy, I like that, thanks again! :)

[Ana R]

Awesome and enticing. Writing and expression can be as intimate and at times more intimate than knowing someone's body, it helps you to know a soul. Thank you for sharing.

[-Scribe in Style-]

Well penned. Not only is the title so catchy but your description is vivid and passionate! Very nicely done!

[....................]

love the title and this beautiful piece...you've held up the title's promise very well :)

[Kelly Scheppers]

Nicely done, Paloma...and very classy!

[1VJ]

Thanks Kelly, much appreciated!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, i want what that poet is having!

very cool write, Paloma...

j.

[1VJ]

Ha ha, thanks for the smile and the kind words. :)

[cloud]

A fun poem for sure. The kind that leave you sweaty and wanting more.

[1VJ]

So nice of you to say Luv, thank you.

[Trace]

Been there, done that,
Best experienced in a collaboration....

Fun write, much enjoyed, {sort of like Sally did.}

Trace

[1VJ]

Thanks so much, glad you did. You would know with your gorgeous collaborations. :)