Unwarranted Indifference

There was never 

a good enough

reason to fall,

being in love was 

hardly warranted,

yet, as destiny

would have it

the abyss

swallowed hard

and in that

imaginary vision

of darkly

tethered delusions

'twas a fate choking

on irreverence...

Reviews

[Pryde Foltz]

A pen that would never go unrecognized … wonderful work … madame divine:)

[Einstein Noodle]

wow! well said .. the image of a black hole swallowing hard is graphic and unique .. good stuff says i! man! i am still shivering ..
E.

[1VJ]

Thanks Einstein, I'm glad you found it so effective!

[Cody]

Love is a powerful energy source perhaps the most most powerful of all metaphysics and you expressed that very well.

[1VJ]

Thanks so much.

[B]

In everything in life
we receive a request and we must approve or decline

Yet in love
Never takes permission

That is what makes it so stunning

Just like your work here
A Gift worth cherishing :)

[1VJ]

I'm smiling, thanks for your kind words. :)

[B]

You deserve to smile always :)

[Samuel Dickens]

I like writing that uses no more words than necessary to make a point, and you've done that brilliantly here. It's all so true, too.

[1VJ]

Thanks for saying, much appreciated.

[....................]

really like this piece...unwarranted love...indifference...delusions...imaginary...and in the end irreverent...destiny can be a cruel sorcerer...

[1VJ]

No doubt, it makes perfect sense when they say love is blind, and mostly deaf and dumb too. Thanks so much FT.

[....................]

:) yes, makes perfect sense

[1VJ]

After the fact, it's always too late by the time you realize it. :)

[....................]

then can we pray and cross fingers and toes for it to end? :) ....or do we simply give int to it?

[1VJ]

We chalk it up to experience, but we're usually doomed to fall again. :)

[....................]

of course...we spend a life time falling and do it so well :)

[1VJ]

The falling part is easy, it's what follows that trips us up. :)

[....................]

therein lies the rub...:)

[1VJ]

The chafe that doesn't respond to band-aids. :)

[....................]

haha, exactly...it was pointless to even try to cover it in the first place :D...are you always this observant the morning after? lol

[1VJ]

Hard to say, I'm too hungover to tell! Haha :)

[....................]

hahahaha....i'll ask you again later :D