Move on, they say.

Move on, they say.

A Story by Pallavi Rathsharma
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Patch ups, breaks up ! This thing is getting too common these days ! But she never understood.

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She was asked , " Are you sure that you are all right ? Have you , uhmm , moved on ? 
She was baffled, what is she supposed to say ! Fake a smile , pretend like everyone do these days , say that she has actually moved on.
She didn't know what to say , 
she Just said , I don't know If i have moved on or not, Nothing was planned , still nothing is planned.
She hasn't yet thought of moving on , cause she hasn't yet accepted the fact  that its actually over.
She still thinks that someday he will return and ask to start from chapter one.
From her side, it was never over. 
It was the same. She still felt the same. 
She was happy with the way things were, she was still in love.
Someday she might actually fall for someone else,
May be she doesn't even want that.
She was in love.
She had promised him that she will love him till the last breathe.
And She was scared that she might move on and break the promise, So she just counted her last breathe.
She was alive, but wasn't living. Only he could bring life back to her.
And she was waiting.
Waiting
Waiting.
May be till the last breathe, she will wait for him 

© 2014 Pallavi Rathsharma


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Pallavi Rathsharma
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Dayum, this one's so good.
Awkward, but it made me sad -_-

Thumbs up :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pallavi Rathsharma

10 Years Ago

Swapna :|
Thanks :)
This is so beautiful! You were able to capture the emotion of love that the character was feeling. You have a talent for this :) I can't wait to read more!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Pallavi Rathsharma

10 Years Ago

Angela :)
Glad to know that you liked it :)

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