For You.

For You.

A Poem by Bare trees

For you...

I'll gather eternal futures 
and recite verses 
from endless planets.

With every star 
that sparks the sky,
I'll direct their light 
on my devotion 
for the whole world to see.

We'll watch yesterday 
drift away
in swirls 
of sunset ripples.

© 2023 Bare trees


Author's Note

Bare trees
I'm not crazy about this one so.........

Thanks to Kaiju.

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This is such a powerfully romantic piece... reciting verses of love and admiration from the moons of endless tomorrows while shouting it to the world as the sun sets on each day... love the pic too, the cloud formation looks like an eye, as if the universe has paused a moment watch this love unfold... beautiful poetry!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Bare trees

9 Years Ago

Great interpretation, thanks FT.
So lovely, I imagine two lovers stating at moon from their own pocket of the globe. Dreaming together.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Bare trees

9 Years Ago

That's a nice interpretation. Thank you.
Cherry Pepperweb

9 Years Ago

You're welcome. :)

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Added on July 3, 2015
Last Updated on March 23, 2023


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