For You.

For you...

I'll gather eternal futures

and recite verses

from endless planets.  

With every star,

that sparks the sky,

I'll direct their light toward my devotion

for the whole world to see.  

We'll watch yesterday

drift away,

in swirls

of sunset ripples.  

Author's Note

I'm not crazy about this one so.........

Thanks to Kaiju.

Reviews

[Amber Albores]

Beautiful I wish I knew how love feels.

[Bare trees]

It is sad to hear you say that. You're a pretty girl, you will find it someday even if it seems impossible. Thanks for the review.

[Amber Albores]

No problem and no I won't find it I'm married but leaving him. Read my other poems you will understand why

[Emily B]

it is gorgeous, so much to see and feel

[Bare trees]

Thank you.

[Writergirl]

Beautiful and touching! :)

[Bare trees]

Thank you.

[jeannemarie coulter]

your just something is immense...reaches into the stars and boldly travels beyond beautifully...thank you

[Bare trees]

Wow, thanks for that.

[Kelly Scheppers]

With each star that sparks the sky,
I'll direct their light
on my devotion
for the whole world to see.

What a gorgeous declaration of love! ...to direct the starlight...

[Bare trees]

Thank you.

[marcus]

When 'you' is everything!!

[Bare trees]

Thank you.

[marcus]

I liked it!

[Bare trees]

I'm happy you did.

[Ellay]

Truly a masterpiece. Love it :D

[Bare trees]

Thank you.

[Lydia Shutter]

Such a romantic write! To announce to the world your love is real and to prove it....ah yes....heavy sigh! Lydi**

[Bare trees]

Thank you very much for the review.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i will profess my love for all to see...directing my light of devotion upon you...

what beautiful imagery to shine one's love upon another.

[Bare trees]

Thanks for the review, I appreciate it.

[Robert]

"Just Something"... Just something good here Palewriter. I heartfelt and tender piece you have penned. Love the last 3 lines so original.

[Bare trees]

Thank you very much for taking the time to read it.