For You.

A Poem by Bare trees

For you...

I'll gather eternal futures
and recite verses
from endless planets.

With every star that sparks the sky,
I'll direct their light toward my devotion
for the whole world to see.

We'll watch yesterday
drift away,
in swirls

of sunset ripples.

© 2025 Bare trees

Author's Note

I'm not crazy about this one so.........

Thanks to Kaiju.

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Reviews

Jordan

"I will gather eternal futures
and recite verses
from each of their moons."

Even in an artistic context it doesn't make sense. Since you're going with the cosmic love theme I would suggest something like 'endless planets' or something to go along with the rest of the poem.

Other than that it was good. The ending was iffy but it worked.

8/8

Posted 9 Years Ago

9 Years Ago

Thank you.

Amber Albores

Beautiful I wish I knew how love feels.

Posted 9 Years Ago

9 Years Ago

It is sad to hear you say that. You're a pretty girl, you will find it someday even if it seems impo.. read more

9 Years Ago

No problem and no I won't find it I'm married but leaving him. Read my other poems you will understa.. read more

Emily B

it is gorgeous, so much to see and feel

Posted 9 Years Ago

9 Years Ago

Thank you.

Writergirl

Beautiful and touching! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago

9 Years Ago

Thank you.

jeannemarie coulter

your just something is immense...reaches into the stars and boldly travels beyond beautifully...thank you

Posted 9 Years Ago

9 Years Ago

Wow, thanks for that.

Kelly Scheppers

With each star that sparks the sky,
I'll direct their light
on my devotion
for the whole world to see.

What a gorgeous declaration of love! ...to direct the starlight...