For You.

For you...

I'll gather eternal futures
and recite verses
from endless planets.

With every star that sparks the sky,
I'll direct their light toward my devotion
for the whole world to see.

We'll watch yesterday
drift away,
in swirls

of sunset ripples.

Author's Note

I'm not crazy about this one so.........

Thanks to Kaiju.

Reviews

[Sleepygirl]

it's not a very long poem but it is still v romantic.

[Bare trees]

I'm glad you thought so, thank you Sleepygirl.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

"We'll watch yesterday
.........drift away
in swirls of sunset ripples."
This is amazingly good! We always keep our hopes high, don't we? Always wishing for a better tomorrow and that too with the one we love..
Nicely penned!

[Bare trees]

Thank you.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You are welcome! ☺

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

A sweet promise to a special someone...
romantic notions and sweet metaphors.

[Bare trees]

I appreciate the reviews.

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

I pleasure to read, :)

[Orchid]

This has universal appeal :)
Alluringly romantic

[Bare trees]

Thanks so much Orchid. :D

[Cat]

Amazing!!! I really like how magnificent you created the subject to be, bigger than the stars or skies or sun. Great.

[Bare trees]

Thanks so much Cat.

[~]

An eternal devotion, measureless like the oceanic sky above us. A wondrous imagery!
beautiful poem!

[Bare trees]

Thanks very much.

[DeirdreInShadows]

i love the imagery - though vague, the use of diction does the trick. Very romantic.

[Bare trees]

Whatever. ha Thank you.

[thundershine]

We'll watch yesterday
.........drift away
in swirls of sunset ripples.

Love this!

[Bare trees]

Thank you very much.

[SunAngel7]

So romantic! You got me at "For You...." and the rest is awesomeness *dramatic sigh* :)

[Bare trees]

Thank you.

[Ruth]

How beautiful...such dedication is a blessing to know and behold :)

[Bare trees]

Thank you very much.