For You.

For you...

I'll gather eternal futures 

and recite verses 

from endless planets.

With every star 

that sparks the sky,

I'll direct their light 

on my devotion 

for the whole world to see.

We'll watch yesterday 

drift away

in swirls 

of sunset ripples.

Author's Note

I'm not crazy about this one so.........

Thanks to Kaiju.

Reviews

[Onlyme]

So romantic, passionate as well as so sincere..awwww beautiful basically.

[Bare trees]

Thank you.

[Onlyme]

You have a romantic heart.

[Fran Marie]

Beautiful words used to create such a lovely imaged poem...nicely done...

[Bare trees]

Thank you.

[Ardra]

It's beautiful....
I read your work....they have a romantic side and then a dark shade to it too.... the dark ones are mesmerising.... I love that one called meet me at your grave...... keep writing ..wonderful words :))

[Bare trees]

Thanks very much.

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

For the right one we would do anything in live...just to find that one, beautiful🌹

[Bare trees]

Thanks for your review.

[Patrick]

The perfect amount of words and a pleasure to read

[Bare trees]

I appreciate the review, thanks.

[Olivia Clune]

Short and sweet can say so much more than a 100 lined poem. Good work!

[Bare trees]

Thank you Olivia.

[C Peril]

This poem is absolutely terrific - faultless.

Every word has an impact, nothing is redundant/superfluous.

It's one of the best poems I've encountered on WritersCafe.

[Bare trees]

Thank you.

[Frosted]

Actually as much as I like the flowers in the field. This one might be a close favourite! I love the way you articulate your words. It paints a vividly clear picture in your head! Keep it up!😊

[Bare trees]

Thank you very much for your thoughts Frosted.

[Rachel Richardson]

I'm crazy about the level of devotion that emotes from this piece. Solemn yet simple.

[Bare trees]

Thank you so much Rachel.

[Rachel Richardson]

Of course.

[Sleepygirl]

it's not a very long poem but it is still v romantic.

[Bare trees]

I'm glad you thought so, thank you Sleepygirl.