For You.

For You.

A Poem by Bare trees

For you...

I'll gather eternal futures 
and recite verses 
from endless planets.

With every star 
that sparks the sky,
I'll direct their light 
on my devotion 
for the whole world to see.

We'll watch yesterday 
drift away
in swirls 
of sunset ripples.

© 2023 Bare trees


Author's Note

Bare trees
I'm not crazy about this one so.........

Thanks to Kaiju.

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I'll gather eternal futures and recite verses...

I love being read to! Eternally... happy sigh! -smiling

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


Bare trees

4 Weeks Ago

Much appreciated, my friend. Thank you. :)
Sheri3Dx

4 Weeks Ago

Much pleasure reading your Poems, Dear Friend.
This is a very sweet and beautiful, celestial poem. Thank you :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Bare trees

3 Years Ago

Thanks for reading, Haley. :)
Relic,
You got me big time here! I am so into starlight, twinkles on water, and the inspiration to think bigger and further. You did well to make this about bigger and further than what is seen. Inspiration is like that.
Great Job!
Blessings,
Kathy

Posted 5 Years Ago


Bare trees

5 Years Ago

Thanks very much for the kind review, Kathy.
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Rye
This is a very beautiful write.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Bare trees

5 Years Ago

Thanks so much, Ryanna. :)
Rye

5 Years Ago

not a problem
I love the celestial theme running through the poem. It gives divine hues to the love. I love the reference to sunset, “swirls of sunset ripples” It’s beautiful, vivid and speaks to me of fairy tale endings.

This poem has everything a lasting, spiritual love needs without being overtly fleshly or sensual.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Romantic but perhaps lacking in passion? Still a nice piece though.

Posted 5 Years Ago


I think it is a wonderful write, very nice and well written

Posted 5 Years Ago


Bare trees

5 Years Ago

Thanks, for taking the time to leave a review.
Jade

5 Years Ago

not a problem, it was a very good write
wonderful and romantic, a very inspired poem.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Bare trees

6 Years Ago

Thanks a lot Ana.
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MCS
its lovely and tender and sweet

Posted 6 Years Ago


Bare trees

6 Years Ago

Thanks for the review, MCS.
Beautiful poem my friend (:
wow, I honestly loved it. the poem was short but meaningful. thank you for sharing.
-Angelina

Posted 6 Years Ago



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