For You.

For you...

I'll gather eternal futures
and recite verses
from endless planets.

With every star that sparks the sky,
I'll direct their light toward my devotion
for the whole world to see.

We'll watch yesterday
drift away,
in swirls

of sunset ripples.

Author's Note

I'm not crazy about this one so.........

Thanks to Kaiju.

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Beautiful poem, the sentiment comes across with sincerity. Great work.

Chris

[Bare trees]

Thanks Chris.

[Sheri3Dx]

I'll gather eternal futures and recite verses...

I love being read to! Eternally... happy sigh! -smiling

[Bare trees]

Much appreciated, my friend. Thank you. :)

[Sheri3Dx]

Much pleasure reading your Poems, Dear Friend.

[Haley]

This is a very sweet and beautiful, celestial poem. Thank you :)

[Bare trees]

Thanks for reading, Haley. :)

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Relic,
You got me big time here! I am so into starlight, twinkles on water, and the inspiration to think bigger and further. You did well to make this about bigger and further than what is seen. Inspiration is like that.
Great Job!
Blessings,
Kathy

[Bare trees]

Thanks very much for the kind review, Kathy.

[Rye]

This is a very beautiful write.

[Bare trees]

Thanks so much, Ryanna. :)

[Rye]

not a problem

[DIVYA]

I love the celestial theme running through the poem. It gives divine hues to the love. I love the reference to sunset, “swirls of sunset ripples” It’s beautiful, vivid and speaks to me of fairy tale endings.

This poem has everything a lasting, spiritual love needs without being overtly fleshly or sensual.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Romantic but perhaps lacking in passion? Still a nice piece though.

[Jade]

I think it is a wonderful write, very nice and well written

[Bare trees]

Thanks, for taking the time to leave a review.

[Jade]

not a problem, it was a very good write

[Papaya]

wonderful and romantic, a very inspired poem.

[Bare trees]

Thanks a lot Ana.

[MCS]

its lovely and tender and sweet

[Bare trees]

Thanks for the review, MCS.