Till Dusk to Dawn...

 

Till dawn to dusk

The body is rejuvenated

The spirit is content

 

Staring at ill luxury

A smile of pity runs through my face

For the satisfaction my spirit craved…is now silent

 

Till dawn to dusk

The body is rejuvenated

The spirit is content

 

Thirst for the heavens enters my body

Discipline of a greater truth comes to realization

Tears of hope quench my eyes

 

Till dawn to dusk

The body is rejuvenated

The spirit is content

 

A bond with One the path of truth, lost through mans desire

With each passing day my arms stretch higher

A ray of hope fills my heart as I realize the path I thread is light itself.

 

Peace…

Author's Note

Enjoy!

Reviews

[TL Boehm]

the repetitive verse, like a chant, a mantra - carries its own resonance. Beautifully done. I believe we all seek a form of peace, an equilibrium

[None]

Your poem ignites that special feeling of being caught between the earth and the heavens. Our spirit can climb if we let it. Beautiful poem!

[Michael X]

Fisnished with such passionate effect, awsome poem, and the meaning reflects
what it is to sleep and being rejuvenate the mind body and soul as one,
the will to drop preconditions is felt with intentful ambition bringing the words
to life, great concept and really leaves the reader pondering life.

[Laura E. Aranda]

Thanks for asking me to review this one. I am sorry it took me so long to get around to it. It was original to say the least. Cheers,lea

[C. C. Burl]

This is kinda cool. I like it. Special and spiritual, like how it feels to get up early in the morning and watch the sunrise. 'Thirst for the heavens enter my body' --- It does, doesn't it? Just lovely. You have a wonderful voice. Flora.