Table for Three

This song I created is about me and two friends. Its actually a parody about ourselves. I wanted to play this song together but it kinda failed. I posted the original song without no edits. So there may be grammer issues and wtvr.

TABLE FOR THREE

What happened today wasn't a figure 8
Cannot explain why, but she left me tonight
Wandering in the moon looking at the stars
I begin to wonder if another would arrive
A day after tomorrow lucks brings in while I await at a table for three at the inn.

The wind settles the wind blows but a table for three remains like stone. At the table our destiny is fulfilled. For the table for three have left their change.

Passion and furry lies within me
Locked away in a lovers right hand
Never to be released, when the time is right.
Forever to be sealed by the kiss of the night.
Oh how much I long for a kiss of a girl
However, I look up and find the bill up the door.

The wind settles the wind blows but a table for three remains like stone. At the table our destiny is fulfilled. For the table for three have left their change.

A fierce warrior out of the darkness of the south-east.Raises to claim his lost throne.
Walking blindly hitting wall and stone. His brow holds firm after each downfall. In the end as he picks his chin he realizes that the table of three awaits him

The wind settles the wind blows but a table for three remains like stone. At the table our destiny is fulfilled. For the table for three have left their change.

 

Reviews

[Windy]

Wow very different from what I've read of your other stuff. Still intense and good though! Windy

[Rhine Wolf]

you lost me on the last stanza, to me it felt out of place. as you said it has not been edited as yet, so that said this was rather nice! looking forward to reading more of your work!

[lorrainelobotomy]

this is super!
very deep :]

[Pj]

I'm a sucker for romance and I fell in love with the lines "Forever to be sealed by the kiss of the night.
Oh how much I long for a kiss of a girl" It just sounds like you're stripped naked and have admitted to what most people fear: Rejection after admittance.

Awesome!