A ROSY DAY

Leave me alone....oh! let me breathe;

Stop tugging at my weak heart..

Please don't strike the knife so deep.

 

Let the light pour in the room;

The flowers are all dying..

Please lift this blanket of gloom.

 

Memories go away..go now;

stop burning my nerves..

Please ..go away.  

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

there is no way i could fight you ,and you know
you took all my strength and i am helpless
how strong you are,you can move me from afar
how steel nerved could never burn down your light
your light took all mine away,and i just flourish in yours
how you took over all of me,you are so unbreakable
and you broke me..strange i still love the all of you
lovely write..

[Padma]

bluessadmood: You have written a wonderful poem through this review..u are a genius.