ALL THAT MATTERS

I just wrote this one.

Beauty alone walks a lonely path
For,Its the soul that matters at last;
A fair face or a fair sky changes hue
Oh! the beauty will dry away as dew;
When the heat of reality strikes
Its the soul's essence that survives;
Look not at my eyes for how they are
See not my glow,for I ain't a  star;
As the seasons change,I sail on the tides of time
My beauty fades,my soul earns a brighter shine.
No fair face or a fair sky in view
As at the end,its just me and you
And Beauty alone walks a lonely path
For,Its the soul that matters at last.

-Padma.

 








 

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

God you started to sing again ,ha ha,saw you standing there getting the rhymes ready..
Its the souls s essence that survives..Look not into my eyes,to see how they are
See not my glow..I aint a star(for me You Are ha ha)
And seasons change and I sail on tides of time
As my beauty fades,my soul even the brighter shines
Not a fair face or a fair sky,In the end its just you and me
Beauty walks a lonely path ,but its the soul that matters at last
What beauty ,what loveliness,how wonderful
lovely write..

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No fair face or a fair sky in view
As at the end,its just me and you

i like the way you wrote this.alot...gret piece well writen

[Padma]

Just a few lines.