Welcome to My Garden

Welcome to My Garden

A Poem by PadfootBlack
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My... secret world, I guess. A fantasy universe of my own invention.

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Welcome to my Garden, my World, my private Wonderland. But be careful. For if you come, you may never want to go -back- again.

 

 

Beware the house of mirrors, an eternal repetition. You could run through forever, and 

never

find

your way...

      ...out.

 

Then do continue on. There's so much more to see, to hear, to taste, to touch, to smell.... fill up your senses in the Garden of Taol, let the sweet nectar of the RainaGruen flower drip slowly onto your tongue, hear the faraway roar of the Cikeri Beast, that low, deep rumble that sends chills down your spine... open your eyes to the wonders around you, let my nature fill your sight. Marvel at the painted sky above you, deep crimson splattered with a harsh violet, subtle blue. Feel the brush of the Pattermonkey's tail as he swishes by you, the small frail body chattering away at the trees. Let the Wind speak to you, she has much to say, as you have much to hear.

 

Welcome to my Garden, my World, my private Wonderland. But be careful. For if you come, you may never want to go -back- again.

© 2011 PadfootBlack


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...you know...this may sound odd, but this literally brought me to tears... Seriously... Maybe the devil can cry...? Crud...

I have dreams of this perfect garden... You just made it even more vivid... Listen, this is going to be a really horrible review, because I find that I am at a loss for words. I don't know what others would think of this, nor should I even care; this is one of the most beautiful things I've ever had the pleasure of reading... It is as if the heavens opened themselves to reveal a Paradise not of this earth, something of emerald and azure...something... I'm going to stop... This is very intense, and special.... I wonder, if people would read something like this, even as it may be an experiment, should they be motivated to seek heaven instead of hell? Perhaps you have shown me the way...

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Very creative and imaginative..
if such a garden exist's sign me
up..great write.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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TAO
...you know...this may sound odd, but this literally brought me to tears... Seriously... Maybe the devil can cry...? Crud...

I have dreams of this perfect garden... You just made it even more vivid... Listen, this is going to be a really horrible review, because I find that I am at a loss for words. I don't know what others would think of this, nor should I even care; this is one of the most beautiful things I've ever had the pleasure of reading... It is as if the heavens opened themselves to reveal a Paradise not of this earth, something of emerald and azure...something... I'm going to stop... This is very intense, and special.... I wonder, if people would read something like this, even as it may be an experiment, should they be motivated to seek heaven instead of hell? Perhaps you have shown me the way...

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 3, 2010
Last Updated on January 29, 2011
Tags: Fantasy, Imagination, world, Wonderland

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