Dear Dad

This sorta just came out of me... meant to be rapped.

"You okay?"

Is what you say

But I can't even

tell you

that I've

had a bad day

Cuz you'll go off

About your problems...

But hey,

don't get me wrong

I'm not ungrateful

What you do for me and Dan..

I'm so thankful!

But there comes a time

when you gotta choose sides

You gotta decide

what laws you'll abide

gonna be the working father

who has no time for his kids

pays the rent and for the food

But is so busy he rids

himself of any chance,

any love there might be

whatever relationship there was

is long-since been

erased from their hearts

Or do you wanna be the Daddy

who may not work as many hours

And yeah, may not have as much money

But have the time

to nourish

to love

two lost teens

in a world of hate

of heartbreak and

torn seams

All I want is for you to listen

I know you love me, Dad,

but it making me so sad

that the twinkle in your eyes

is lost to the world

The future unfurls

Your kids are grown

Moved out

No longer Daddy's little girl

I don't think you've heard

A damn word

I've said

This whole year

Seems ever since Mom left

we're a burden

a weight with heft

You say you love us

Yeah, I know you do

But it's getting harder

to look you in the eye

I'm sorry but it's true

I don't feel like I know you, Dad

Please don't get mad

But I'm about to lie to you

Even though I wish you really knew

what I feel inside

But here comes the tide

I'll just smile and nod

Though this whole deal is flawed

Then we can dine

Over a silent meal.

Here it goes, the classic line:

"Yeah, Dad.

 

I'm fine".

 

 

Author's Note

So... yeah. You really have to read it aloud for it to sound okay. It's a rap. Rythm's not my thing, obviously, but I tried my best.

Reviews

[_thesovo]

Love it, Padfoot. (;

[_thesovo]

I'm absolutely SHOCKED! Like my life in a way.

'Cept Dear Biological Daddy left when I was 2...
and Step Dad divorced mum a couple years ago..

- But, you've put this in beautiful rhyme.

[Kitten]

I can rap this for you. Your personal Asian rapper. As for the spelling errors I'll erase them from my mind. Written and spoken from the heart. I loved it.

:]